The Librarians Merc Corp

wow you fuck face, i was going to take it easy on your scrub ass but no you just couldnt do it right.

1. no dialogue. NO DIALOGUE. ALL STAR FIGHTS NEED DIALOGUE.

2. laser effects are supposed to be like tracer rounds. NOT LASER POINTERS

3. tie fighters do not have built in targeting computers in their cockpit. tho it looks nice, they have a smaller, but inferior targeting computer unlike the Rebel Starfighters

4. Shields exist for a reason. although not all rebel ships blow up quickly, some are one-shotted and that is illogical. droids are protected by shields until shields are down.

5. Y-wings have ion cannons. y-wings are slow due to their missile/bomb payload and ion cannon + link laser cannons. this is a minor point, but competent Y-wing pilots will use their ion cannons, especially against star destroyers.

6. star destroyer ion cannons DO NOT FIRE GREEN TURBOLASER PROJECTILES

7. star destroyer turbolasers DO NOT FIRE BLUE ION CANNON PROJECTILES

8. star destroyer ion cannons DO NOT FIRE SHORT BURSTS. THEY FIRE LONG TRAILING SHOTS BECAUSE OF ION REACTOR OUTPUT.

9. medical frigates are shielded and can stand turbolaser barrages. tie bombers are built to take out frigates/transports/blockade runners/small ships with concussive missiles/cluster missiles. this is a minor issue.

10. the blockade runner would have been killed by the star destroyers first. and then the medical frigate, which is unarmed. again, minor issue.

your animation is great. and i like the flow of it all and i can see the story-board in my head, but YOU DONT MAKE A STAR WARS ANYTHING WITHOUT THE DAMN RESEARCH. dont ever do ANYTHING like this again without the FUCKING RESEARCH. here is your fucking critique, i hope you ruin the millennium falcon too, prick.